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PostSubject: Whitney Faiths Poem.   November 16th 2008, 11:21 pm

In a dark room, only a flicker of light
The day is gone and fades to night
The sky is lit by only the moon
While some play to take their life to soon
Though the empty house silence falls
The night before screaming walls
The holds the razor tight
And recalls everything that night
Nothing new seems to change day to day
All she's ever wanted was to get away
Told she can never do anything right
It's always fight after fight
She always seems to make her mom mad
And nowhere in sight is her dad
As she holds her wrist
She wonders if she'll be missed
What else is there to look for
You know it's bad when even the sky spells war
The rain drops fall at a quick pace
As tear drops run down her face
She looks out the window
And wonders where to go
Reaching up and touching the glass
Wondering how long this storm will last
When you think about it the storm has always been
Because after one another again
Either way she can't take it
And that she will finaly admit
She positions the blade and closes her eyes
Slides it across many times, then shocked with surprise
Blood pores out like rain
Adding dots to the floor that once was plain
Like a quick cold breeze she catches her breath
All of a sudden terrified by death
A voice in her mind says to hold on
The room starts to spin she feels already gone
A bright light appears at the door
It seems as if she's seen it before
She looks as the blood covered blade again
Is this how it's always been?
The light darkens and turns dim
Then she remembers him
She thought he was the one to love
Maybe her expectations were to high above
He denys the words that were said
But she can't help bit beleive the words she read
It was him she used to beleive
Now is this the death bed to recieve?
He said she was beautiful,said he loved her
Before not questioning, now not sure
This time that trust was pushed to far
Even if she lives, she can't erase the scar
The thunder of the storm stops roaring
But the blood and rain keep pouring
Quick as lighting was the blade
And look how much damage was made
Outside colorful lights start to flash
And quickly in uniforms dash
No longer is the house still
She opens her eyes and sees a boy begin to kneel
She hears him whisper "you can't be dieing"
Barely able to speak for all the crying
They stopped the bleeding
But her heart slows beating
She forces a faint smile to let him know
That she loves him, but she will go
Her pulse gets slower
And he bends down lower
He whispers "I love you"
Her last words "I love you too"
Her eyes closed..she's to weak
A tear of his fell to her cheek
Her lips ice cold, but them he kissed
There was her answer, she will be missed
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PostSubject: Re: Whitney Faiths Poem.   November 17th 2008, 6:54 am

Oh Aaron.... I dont know what to say.... Its a sad poem... But its really good! Did you write it?
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PostSubject: Re: Whitney Faiths Poem.   November 17th 2008, 12:09 pm

no i didntwhitney faith did
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PostSubject: Re: Whitney Faiths Poem.   December 8th 2008, 5:30 pm

That's still good though.
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PostSubject: Re: Whitney Faiths Poem.   December 12th 2008, 10:46 pm

thats a really good poem
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